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Thursday portrait. #2: Spring

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Another one from my Thursday portraits.
"There's something in the air, and I'm not talking about the gamma radiation" (c) Mr.New Vegas
Hope you'll like it!
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© 2016 - 2024 tokkamak
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hello tokkamak

This is an intriguing piece. The hair in particular stands out, as if it has a life of its own. I like the girls expression, which suggests a certain demureness on her part and a mild amusement at her present situation. The colors are also rich and vibrant with a good overall color caste.

I would suggest that the composition of the image is a little top heavy. Its as if the image is forming a triangle, with the base at the top and the point at the bottom. What could help is maybe add more elements at the bottom to even it out more. Also, all the detail is in the hair and face. With more detail in the shoulders and clothes it would also create a more even composition.

Despite all that this is a good picture with great technique, especially in rendering hair and color.